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Everything In Its Right Place by Rivan145th Everything In Its Right Place by Rivan145th
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This is my birthday gift for the lovely :iconhungary-san:
She asked me to draw something about thiefshipping ...and I had never done a real thiefshipping image before...well, never did a romantic scene either! The only one I've ever done looked all weird and stuff :/ ( know the one ç_ç)

Plus I was already drawing my own idea of how their first kiss should have been ([link] ) … aaaand it was anything but romantic, really XP

So that was my first truly romantic scene, and I wanted to try my best… despite the fact that the stream of consciousness is very basic and a little stereotyped; unfortunately this is all I can do with my English knowledge ^^’
But drawing it has been a strange and wonderful experience, and I'm glad I did it.

So thank you for giving me this opportunity Roy, and happy birthday! ^ ^

All the single images on tumblr: [link]
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THIS.... This is gorgeous. My God. You as an artist are so amazing it is not even something i can put into words. The only thing i have to have changed is the wording. Some of it is a little odd, could be smoother. But other than that, dang. DAUM!
Plus the fact that millions of fan girls are for this couple/pairing, and this is the most perfect vision of them. You put it into pictures and made it a reality for the fangirls and maybe fan boys of the YGO community.
You keep doing what you do and good things shall happen!
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14 out of 14 deviants thought this was fair.

I rarely do critiques, but it kind of saddens me to see your artwork getting a load of comments, that aren't even sentences. And your picture deserves definitely more than a bit of drooling and fangirl-orgasms.

It may sound strange, but the one thing that sparked my interest, had not been your drawings in the first place, but the text accompanying those: It might be nothing but a stream of consciousness, but you are pretty eloquent and are able to express emotions and thoughts that run so wonderfully well with these pictures. Even without them, it would be a good poem, even if english might not be your mother tongue and indicates that you must be quite literate in your native idiom.

You've managed to write/draw romance, that would've turned into some sappy, mushy mess at the hands of many other artists, so, thank you for creating something with feel AND thought without going downhill too some stereotypical fangirl fluff.

I like the concept of the odyssey through time, always on the hunt for something/someone that might've been there all the time and free to choose. That's kinda cool. XD~

As for the visualization: What transports your internal monologue so well, are the gazes and gestures between those two: There's nothing left to be said and as your title suggests 'everything is in it's right place'. (off topic: Do you like Radiohead? I secretly hope you choose your title because of that great song! :la: )

You have a fine hand for contrasts and it's fun to see how you maneuver through the whole palette from the darkest purple to blueish white. Even the neon green highlights on the last panel are fitting almost harmonic into the setting. There might be digital works out there that are more refined, but the rough edge of your coloring only adds to the appeal imo.

So, to sum it all up into one, final synopsis: With artworks like this, it's fun to be into anime/manga, because it proves that fanart can be more that fanservice and nice colors. And it's always a relief to discover, that there are people out there who are able to fuse poetic and visual topics.

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OyopsOfPoyo2013 Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I am legit crying right now :iconfeelsplz:
France752 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Student Artist
I can now rest in peace knowing everything is put in balance now Worship Worship Worship Worship Worship Worship Worship Worship Worship Worship Worship Worship Worship 
luckytheEXTREME Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
After looking at this for like 20 times *SNIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIFF* Waaaah! 
rainbow-ravens Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014  Student General Artist
i am going to go cry myself to sleep..... D:
Sachiko-Spardason Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
*cries* Da feels! T^T
makey-suu Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I just happen to look at it all the time, I'm crying cuz arrrrrg why they die no no no no why bakura whyyyyyyyyyy anyway they sure look super good *-* why the anime wasn't drawn by you XDD
VanGold Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Just perfect! Beautiful work :love:
This made my day.
OlgaChan789 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I cried. ♥
PaigeePie Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Omg.... Stop!
 I had to literally stop at each panel thingy, stare at the awesome quality of it, and then just die a little inside :3 

So awesome and cute
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